Rest of pool somewhat translated, fixes appreciated. And is she supposed to sound so emo?

Not usually, that's typically Uranus and Neptune's shtick. Ami's usually pretty upbeat when she's not worrying about her grades.

Yeah, I didn't expect it to be a downer like that... She's just masturbating, what's the big deal?
Honestly, any notion of how that's "vulgar" or "a sin" can fek right off back to 1950, as far as I'm concerned.