The mouth looks really weird. or the face perhaps.
You see the mouth and then you see the mouth shape...
Somehow it just really awkward.

Kreceir said:

The mouth looks really weird. or the face perhaps.
You see the mouth and then you see the mouth shape...
Somehow it just really awkward.

If you remove the mouth, the picture actually looks better, like she was slightly opening her mouth from a proper angle.

Kreceir said:

The mouth looks really weird. or the face perhaps.
You see the mouth and then you see the mouth shape...
Somehow it just really awkward.

Ya weird but strangely it's kinda erotic. Drawing's kinda perfect, don't know where it could have gone wrong if it's this good. It would have been better with little of blush and little bit touch up on the eyes.

Kreceir said:

The mouth looks really weird. or the face perhaps.
You see the mouth and then you see the mouth shape...
Somehow it just really awkward.

I've seen this stupid error before. The artist draws one angle then abruptly forgets about it and does something else. It's such a stupid rookie mistake...