Substantial changes to lineart and shading in panels 3&4; Hibiki's face redrawn in panels 1&4. Some characters changed (check_translation); Hibiki in panel 2, Admiral in panel 3, and in the left insert. Detail added to her eyes, mouth, and ear in the insert and her elbow shortened.

Panel 2 - 晩 more cleanly drawn.
Panel 3 - 響 changed to 響さん (Hibiki-san), changed.
Insert - 提督 (Admiral) changed to 司令 (Commander), changed.