The top panel has an interesting abstraction. You can see Teruzuki hiding behind her sister's arm, or you can see Teruzuki under Akizuki's arm with her eyes closed and tongue sticking out of breath. Not intended but funny anyway.

rom_collector said:

The top panel has an interesting abstraction. You can see Teruzuki hiding behind her sister's arm, or you can see Teruzuki under Akizuki's arm with her eyes closed and tongue sticking out of breath. Not intended but funny anyway.

Damn it, now I can't unsee. Nice spotting.

I'd love to see those comics translated. Author likes Hatsuzuki quite a lot.

I gave translating the rest of it a go, but I'm not too confident on the accuracy.

A proofreader would be nice.

echo591 said:

I gave translating the rest of it a go, but I'm not too confident on the accuracy.

A proofreader would be nice.

Checked and corrected.