The sorrows of criticism.... We're thinking about winning the manga prize with that this time!Well, except we also got bored and stopped halfway through...What do you think, Miss Asahina?... Miss Asahina, you sure know a lot...But I did my best to draw these...Maybe I think too much like an otaku...... Putting aside your bad drawing skill for now... how can anyone accept this when you didn't even bother to draw until the last page? I think that doing it like this is disrespecting the publisher and the other contributors. You didn't even draw this in proper manga submission papers, this is all drawn on the back of the school printouts... This is not even a joke, it just plain sucks. If you've read the contest' summary, you'd know that this kind of drawing style is not acceptable at all. Looking at this, I can see your half-hearted attitude oozing from it.From the look of it, you don't even know what screen tone is, do you? Well, there are also artists who don't use it, because of reasons like wanting to express the feelings more, drawing direction, etc. But this thing is none of that, heck, you didn't even use a ruler... If you don't know how to draw manga, then why not study instead? Even the story looks like an absurd dream someone once told me they saw. I'll be honest with you, it was a pain, reading this thing.
