Oh, moonspeak. Dirty talk sounds especially silly when it's literally translated.

It would sound even dumber if you'd translated all the 'ohiiiiiiiiiiii' stuff too, so I think it was the right call. Especially the sentient devouring cervix there screaming its defiance to the world.

Sadly, most ero-dialogue is just crap and only devalues the picture (I'm looking at you, Mogudan).

I think that's the lavos scream noise.

Backs don't bend that way. It looks like she's been chopped in half.